THE DISTANCE BETWEEN IMAGINATION AND REALITY
O…dear…. O…my deer…
My dear flower……….
I cannot but love you dear
I like you dear
But is it fair, to tell
“I love you dear”
I need you near…
To love you forever
I keep you in my heart
Will “take care” sure
It’s a fact; no force can
Change you from there
But I am in despair
That it is too… Far
The distance between
Imagination and reality
Yes, it is. …It’s too far
But I hope…oneday
My dear will be near
A strong bonding doesn’t need conversations, doesn’t need togetherness. As long as true love lives in my heart, no doubt, my flower will not lose its fragrance.
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COMMENT 1
Yeda jasime… ethu nee thanee eduthiyathanennu thonnunnu.copy/paste allannu kandal ariyam..Vayichaal manasilaunnundu.ninakku oru line undennu adyame njan paranjille, eppol confirm aayi.
ALSA GEOGY
Dear jasee,
As a beginner it is marvelous, attractive, and also it fascinated me.
You succeeded in telling that you are in deep love with somebody. tell me…. who is she. I am not a regular reader of poem, so I am not in a position
To criticize you, but I think you should use similes to convey your ideas.
You should put a title for the work. Keep it up. Write more and more and more. God bless you always… Praseetha
GOOD.
MR.RAMACHANDRAN
SR GR RG,MCH TRCHR
This is not a poem
This is your mind
I understand your feeling…but….
Thangalude vishvasam thangale rakshikkatete
I will pray.
For that …day…
HAREESH
MCH, TRCHR
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