SCENE 1
Was that only a dream or something else? Tell me the truth.
I don’t know what made flower to ask so? I was just telling the value of true love that it has no boundaries. Great walls and obstacles cannot do any harm to it, but they will increase the rigidity of true love.
SCENE 2
My heartbeat increased. Anyway I have to answer the question. But… I was unable to do it. I was in need for some more time. The rare incident where I realized the value of ‘time’ and need for ability to take right decisions in short time.purposefully, I made an attempt to deviate flower from the subject. But again flower asked…
“Please answer my question….”
Was it a serious query or a trick by flower to know my mind?
SCENE 3
Was it serious?
If so, sure, my dream touched flower’s heart. Flower wants to know whether my love is true.
Was it a trick?
If so, sure, flower wanted to ridicule me. flower might tell….”I had not asked you to love me”.
SCENE 4
Is it fair to tell..
“I love you truly”. Albert Einstein said: gravitation cannot be held responsible for people falling in love. I still wonder why I loved flower, loving flower, and shall love flower.sure, it is not because of gravitation.
Scene 5
Visualizing feedback of flower (imagination)
Firstly I decided to answer, “Yes, I love you truly”
What might be the flower’s reply then?
“Yes dear, I love you too…
I am telling this because I know flower’s mind or to say I am the only person who discovered a special attribute of the mind of the flower, which is absent in others. I don’t know flower knows it.
SCENE 6
ME:DON’T THINK OF MATTERS WHICH ARE NOT ACHEIVABLE.BE PRACTICAL .I.E “THINK FRANTICALLY, LIVE PRACTICALLY”
Flower: alas # .I have not asked you to take risk. I am also practical. There is no need to tell me. Don’t misunderstand me.
Scene 7
“Be practical” and “risk”
Everybody know the meaning of the first one.
The risk actually is “why I should put my flower in risk.”
So I took a decision not to tell flower “I love you truly” BECAUSE “I NEVER WANT TO WORRY MY FLOWER”
Scene 8
o.k.. There is no doubt that I love flower. It’s just because of my true love i was given permission to enter the heaven. I missed flower in earth, in heaven and finally God accepted me and allowed me to dissolve in his power. If I agree to be with flower here, in earth, I will never get my flower there, in heaven.I wish, In heaven I can live with flower forever.I need my flower in heaven.
Scene 9
THOSE WHO KNOW ABOUT MY TRUE LOVE IS ONE MYSELF AND THE OTHER IS GOD.
Still I am in a doubt “ormayil viriyunna puuvinu suganthamundo……………….”
scene 10
"you can't understand others until you understand yourself"
THE END.........................
4 അഭിപ്രായങ്ങൾ:
Are you in a good mental plane now?
It is really with a sense of great satisfaction that you are presenting a pretty, marvellous work that deserves admiration. You are leaving no stones unturned in improving its quality and depth.perhaps; it may be some of your deep-seated feelings that guide you in creating such a work. In my perspective of view, there is some refection of basic, general truths in your story. God never intended life on any level to be struggle. God provided every life on every level of existence with everything they needed to be happy, not just happy, actually it was intended that every living thing exist in the blissful state f being one with God.Anyway, I am too small to comment you. Go on with your superfluous imagination and mastery in literature. Destiny will surely embrace you. With all good wishes for your bright future.
Lovingly Ur’s
Sreekumar.R
Sree4r@rediffmail.com
True attempt to express your love, deeply seated in your mind…keep it up expect more and more such true works. All the very best.
Praseetha
Prasoo123@rediffmail.com
First of all I appreciate your attempt to make a story on love. You know, what I could read in it is full of hidden romanticism based on your true love. The way of presentation as scene by scene made your work easy and also understandable for the readers. But I think in some context it require a bit modification in language usage. There is proof in it that your words and deeds move together in one direction. You are reluctant to offer a “shake hand” feeling that it may break the barrier. There you are practical. But you think frankly free of barriers hence the story emerged. all the best for your next work, make it ready soon.
With regards
Parsad.m prasadmaniyappan@yahoo.co.in
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